These are all really good points! I am aware of each one, and I must confess I had some longer drafts in which I did include some of your points — expecially about the DLC, which I explain in this piece.
I also covered the abomination of the DLC in my blog here.
I agree that the WL section is weak — chalk that up to a combination of fatigue, time pressure and a desire to keep the piece from being too long.
As you may notice, I have now broken the 10 points up into separate articles, which I intend to edit and expand — if you want to collaborate on any of these with some specific content, I’m happy to add you to the by-line!